Haiku #15 – Brambles

Fruit picking with mum.
“A dog might have pissed on that,
don’t pick the low ones”.

1 thought on “Haiku #15 – Brambles”

  1. In reading the poem in a reader, the first line was read before the rest of the poem could be seen. It sounding so warm and nice … then the second line was read. That was a bit twisted.

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